Sunday, October 30, 2011

I Told You The Truth

Of all the experiences
I've had in this life
There's one I can tell you
Just cuts like a knife

To be called a liar
Like you've done to me
Is a total injustice
I can hardly believe!

Take my word or not now
That's up to you
My conscience is quite clear!
I told you the truth!
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16 comments:

  1. ♥Sie♥October 31, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    hehehe..looks like I have said it many times Ms.Louise..though the truth really hurts and cuts like a knife..we have to say it otherwise..and usually I say it because I care for someone..though saying it nicely would be better.

    *visiting you Ms.Louise ;)*

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  2. Louise HernanNovember 1, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    Thank you again for your comment Sie. I'm sure you would tell the truth to someone even if it was hard for them to hear - because you care about people alot. :)

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  3. SagittarianNovember 3, 2011 at 1:17 AM

    I like this Louise, same with me, I hate to be called liar, because I always want the truth even if it will hurt me. :)

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  4. Louise HernanNovember 3, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    Hi Ros - Thank you so much for your comment - have a great day!! :)

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  5. rocketNovember 3, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    http://scarlettisoncharge.blogspot.com/2011/11/if-only-i-meet-your-blue-eyes-for.html feel free to read my poems , i'm new

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  6. Louise HernanNovember 3, 2011 at 3:50 PM

    Thank you for visiting my site Rocket - I just read your poem "If Only I Meet Your Blue Eyes" and left you a comment. Have a nice day. :)

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  7. RustyNovember 4, 2011 at 12:44 AM

    IT is sad when there is a lack of trust especially when you are bring truthful and accused otherwise! Beautiful poem Louise!

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  8. Louise HernanNovember 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    Thanks Rusty - I had been thinking about how I'd feel if someone told me I was lying about writing my poems - that's what inspired me. Never know where it will come from. :)

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  9. Prime AqueNovember 23, 2011 at 5:15 AM

    I speaks for the truth, sometimes I am feed up for people who don't believe when I say I tell them the truth, but today I don't care because I am sure my conscience wont bite me on the ass.

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  10. Louise HernanNovember 23, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    Thank you for your comment Prime - it hurts when people don't believe what we know is the truth. Hang in there and rise above it! :)

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  11. SamratNovember 26, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    Hi, beautifully depicted the pangs of heart when you are misunderstood despite acquainting someone with the truth.

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  12. Louise HernanNovember 27, 2011 at 7:17 AM

    Thanks so much Sam!! :)

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  13. WawanDecember 3, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    Wow. Your poems are really good. New reader here and because of these beautiful poems, i will definitely be coming back :)

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  14. Louise HernanDecember 3, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    Thank you Wawan!! :)

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  15. ♥Sie♥December 22, 2011 at 9:33 PM

    hello Ms.Louise just passing by..Merry Christmas *hugs* :)

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  16. Louise HernanDecember 23, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Merry Christmas to you too Sie!! :)

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