Thursday, February 3, 2011

You Broke My Heart

I can't believe
What's going on
It's like a dream
That's gone all wrong!

You say you love me
Well if that's true
How could you
Have been so cruel?

I don't deserve
What you put out
Cause that is not
What love's about!

It's giving what
You hope to get
Care - respect!

Instead you tear
My world apart
You did me wrong!
You broke my heart!


  1. This is what i am feeling right now..:( how i wish not to feel this anymore..

    Thanks for sharing Louise.. hugs and kisses for you..:)

  2. I'm so sorry to hear your heart is hurting Ros!! There's just no pain like it - but it will heal. Hang in there and smile thru your tears if you can because it does help. :)

  3. For years my mother has hurt me, with many excuses about why. She cannot see past herself and she cannot see the damage and hurt she has passed on to her kids. This poem reflects part of how i feel.

  4. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment Catherine. That's such a sad situation - my best to you!!


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